In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Owning a

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is a popular choice for most people rather than renting one. Many people have been working hard to earn enough money to purchase a

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of their own even though renting one is

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a choice.

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essay will examine the causes and the benefits of buying our own

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. Nowadays, populations have been increasing lately for the recent centuries. Having

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shelter

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is an important thing

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humans' lives.

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the fact that renting

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shelter

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like an apartment,

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, or condo is just contemporary, people definitely want something

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in their lives

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for a

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. The future is unforeseeable;

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, if we

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a

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then

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it will absolutely be ours.

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, if we rented a room in a small apartment

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one day that apartment closed without warning that

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be a huge

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problem for us. Buying a

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means that we are the

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owner

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of the

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, so we are the ones making the rules. Unlike renting a

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, we must follow all the rules that the

owner

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mentioned.

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, the

owner

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of a

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decided to let others rent their

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.

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, the

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emphasized that the

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must be in the same condition as before it

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rented. When we

are owning our

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a

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, the decision-making is up to us. If you dislike the wall

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the lack of space,

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we can expand the room

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we desire. In conclusion, buying or renting a

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is depending

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on each person.

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, buying a

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means that we are in charge and it

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to us as long as we

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to.