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Some people believed that maintaining public libraries is a waste of time because nowadays, computer technology can easily replace their purpose. To what extend do agree or disagree?

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It is believed by some that the purpose of the public libraries has been replaced by computer
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. I completely agree, and in
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. Unlike the
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 that you need to spend
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 to travel
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 the advanced
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 we have, you can now browse to the internet all the things you need to know on your own handphone.
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, if you need to find something, you can find it easily on the internet just by typing, rather than using a book that takes
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 to find whatever you need.
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, for people that have limited
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, the
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 is not a convenient place to go.
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, working students that do not have much
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 to go to the
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. They can browse the internet to do their research while at work during their break. With
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 it will be easy for them to study and work at the same
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. They can manage their
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 better.
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 is the limited
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 to borrow the book. We all know that it has a limited day when you want to borrow a book from the
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. It is because they only have few copies.
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, those students doing their research have to rush and return back the books on that specific day given by the librarian. With
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, students have a hard
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 getting all the information they need. In conclusion, indeed, public libraries are waste of
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 because computer
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 is more accessible and searchable.
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