Increasing number of students are going to university instead of working after high school. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who do this.

Education
is very important in everyone
life
as it
provide
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us knowledge and valuable lesson of
life
. Nowadays more and more students are opting for higher
education
rather than doing
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the job
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job
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.In
this
essay ,I will discuss both the pros and cons of
this
trend.
To begin
, students who
chooses
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higher
education
are more likely
succeed
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in
life
. For example, a
university
of California did a survey in which it was found that student who
choose
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go higher
education
has 80
percent
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chance succeeding in
life
.
In addition
,students who opt for
university
lead to
increase
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in postgraduate who will earn handsomely which in return help to boost the economy. On the other hand ,
beside
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the upside of
this
trajectory drawbacks cannot be undermined.
Firstly
, it put
financial
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a financial
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burden on parents of
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student who go
direct
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from high school for
university
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a university
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degree.
This
is due to the fact that there is no break between the transition from school to
university
.
Secondly
, a person who starts working at
early
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an early
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age has less chance to
high income
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job because he
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doesn’t
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don’t
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won't
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have any
university
or any
skill
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course. If student start earning at
early
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age it
provide
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financial benefit to the
familu
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family
To conclude, it is clear that
student’s
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decision to acquire a
university
degree
is has
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both merits and demerits
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