In some countries, criminal trials are shown on television for the public. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Crime is one of the

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discussed topics in modern society. Some countries broadcast

trials

in order to increase social awareness of judicial procedures. In my opinion, the demerits of trial broadcasting outweigh the merits.

Although

this

practice educates the community, potential fraudsters and

criminals

can gain knowledge to

further

use it for their own

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. The following paragraphs will highlight my opinion

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relevant examples. Admittedly, there are some benefits of showing criminal

trials

through TV. People can watch these shows and learn about

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system in the country and judicial proceedings.

As a result

,

instead

of wasting their time slouching in front of the TV people will get a chance to be legally literate. In the future, individuals will be confident about what is right and what is wrong from

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point of view.

For instance

, individuals will be able to identify frauds and illegal activities with

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ease.

Moreover

, potential

criminals

can see that he or she might actually get punished if

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a crime.

Subsequently

,

trials

can instil fear of breaking the law and deter people from criminal activities.

On the other hand

,

criminals

and fraudsters can learn how they possibly can find ways to avoid punishments.

For example

, they can learn about the loopholes in the law and judicial procedures.

Secondly

, in

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teenagers or their parents may be broadcasted for breaking the law.

As a result

, after watching

trials

, these children may be bullied at school and avoided by others.

This

can lead to psychological trauma and difficulty to re-enter the community increasing the possibility to re-offend.

To conclude

, I personally believe that

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of trial broadcasting outnumber the advantages. Judicial procedures can teach citizens about the legal system,

however

, publicity can detrimentally affect

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lives of individuals and potential

criminals

can use their knowledge to avoid punishment.