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Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Good handwriting is essential for pupils to achieve academic success. Some folk argue that the dominance of technology has reduced the necessity of penmanship.I partially agree with
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 statement in the below paragraph I will explain the reasons.
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 with, the innovation of technologies made tremendous changes in view of writing. Learning the
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 of electronic devices is pivotal for individuals life so from school days it is supported by
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 and parents to type their
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 on computers.
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,after school period there is no
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 with handwriting
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 the majority of jobs demand to
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 laptop or computer for making their job the easiest .
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 ,after primary ,classes many
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use
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 a pen for their writing if any mistake occurs it would be difficult to erase but technology has made it easier.
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 ,some
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 require more time for their handwriting
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 of focusing on the importance of academic
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 they would focus to make writing more beautiful.
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,due to various reasons
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 should teach
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 about the significance of write
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.handwriting is one of the best ways to memorize subject
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 it would help to remember what we have thought by
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.For evidence,in mathematics what problem we have written by hand that should
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 in mind forever.
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,the
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 of modern technologies diverts
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 mind from studies which affect their examinations . To conclude,children should be encouraged to learn the
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 of technologies
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 they should be aware of the significance of handwriting.it is hoping parents and
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 should teach children to enhance their ability in both aspects.
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