Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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and feel the

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of vehicles will increase. I consider

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that I will explore in the ensuing essay.

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of finance is increase day by day, the demand and

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cars

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increasing, and will increase

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in some decades.

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facing a bust of population, which lifting the prices of necessity.

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are becoming more

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there

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cost, to minimize

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like others, they searching the way for reducing

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same type of phenomenon

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influence me and my close

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; we see that most of

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using own vehicles. In light of the foregoing, I believe

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more vehicles in twenty years than

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in future, my personal experience is a compelling illustration of

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very small amount of vehicle, I found owned by

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because most of them cannot afford it. But in recent times, civilians have lot of

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, I found that almost every

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will own more

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than

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will lift up, and they

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

257 words

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animal and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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