Internet shops will take over physical stores. Do you agree or disagree?

This

is the technology age, our lives have been changed by

this

a lot,

such

as shopping habit, and the number of

people

tends to use online shopping is increasing rapidly. Some

people

say that physical

stores

like department

stores

,grocers and boutiques are going to be replaced by online

shops

one day. I believe that

this

will happen and I am going to explant why it will happen. There are several factors to lead

this

phenomenon.

First

of all, we enjoy the internet brings the convenience nowadays, it has no time limitation as the traditional

shops

do.Because of

this

, customers can do shopping any time as they want, especially these days

people

are busier at work.

For example

, I usually work late and when I finish work the

shops

are always closed so shopping in the physical

stores

is almost impossible for me.

Therefore

, online

stores

are more suitable for me and nowadays

people

's lifestyles.

In addition

for the

business

owners

, online

stores

can reduce the cost of running because they do not have to pay for the expensive physical shop's rent.

Thus

more and more

business

owners

are willing to do their

business

online. Another significant factor is online shopping has no geographical requirement.

This

brings more benefice to the shoppers and the

business

owners

, which means shoppers can purchase the products from anywhere, any time all over the world, and the

business

owners

can promote and sell their products to the world.

For instance

, if a

product

only sells in Hong Kong a physical store

then

I want to purchase

this

item I have to fly there and get it. It cost me inconvenience and

also

the company limited the sell of the

product

.

However

, if

this

product

's company set up an online store

such

as in eBay,Amazon platform, it will be a different story, they will tread more

this

product

to other counties and buyers are easier to have

this

item. As a

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. To sum up,

people

's shopping habit has been changed by the technology lifestyle, and online

shops

have more benefits to both shoppers and sellers than the physical

stores

.

Therefore

, I believe the physical

stores

will replace by internet

shops

.