3i. #Work | #Travel - In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantage of young people who decide to do this. (IELTS , AC)

A

year

before starting a

university

can change the entire life of

students

, which some teenagers prefer to break studying for a

year

to gain invaluable experiences to work or travel during the interval, whereas others

agrue

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argue

agree

that it wastes money and time for studying. In

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essay, I will provide the benefits and the drawbacks of the statement, and present my perspective toward

this

. The

first

pro that we need to take into

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consideration is knowing yourself. Despite studying in a

university

for 3 years, some

students

may not know their real intention and what to do for living in the future.

Therefore

, working before

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university

entrance is a great opportunity to find your

favorite

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fields of study and jobs.

Moreover

, it can provide the working experience, which can be the profile for

applying

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a

job

.

For example

, prestigious companies always search for the graduate, who have

job

experience at least one

year

. For

this

reason, if they have ever worked or done an internship, they will have a better chance to get recruited compared to those without working experience.

However

, there are some cons

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breaking a school for a

year

.

Students

will delay their learning for a

year

too.

Instead

of spending 4 years

for

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graduating

a

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university

, and can start doing

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a job

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job

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early, they will graduate later than

students

who immediately start

a

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university

.

Furthermore

, in order to work or travel for a

year

, a massive amount of budget

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to be spent including living and

traveling

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travelling

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costs.

For instance

, for

internship

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in Japan for a

year

, I needed to spent approximately 120,000 baht for

this

trip, which you can afford

an

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small

eco car

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with

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this

price. In conclusion,

although

working or

traveling

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travelling

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before going to a

university

for a

year

will cost

a

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enormous amount of money, and delay your graduation, it is worthwhile to do because it provides unforgettable moments to know yourself, and

better

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opportunity for

applying

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a dream

job