In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent (how much) do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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this

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, the company of fast

food

is constantly on the rise.

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went up

a

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quality of

people

who get

health

problems from unhealthy

food

such

as fast

food

. The

argument

that

government

should increase tax on fast

food

is an

argument

that is

both agreed and disagree with by many. The two sides of

this

argument

will be

throughly

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thoroughly

analysed and

discuss

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in

this

essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

Firstly

,

a

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higher

taxes

will impact

health

problems positively.

Quick-

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Quick food

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food

is the main reason that harms

people

also

have a negative impact

to

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on

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their

health

.

For instance

, there are many unhealthy products in fast

food

such

as oils. If

food

have

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too many oils,

this

will make

critizen

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citizen

get too many calories and

also

get higher cholesterol than eat healthy

food

.

Thus

, increasing

taxes

being used to control

people

health

problems is considerable.

This

is why it can be argued that

government

should impose a higher tax on

this

kind of

food

.

On the other hand

,

rising

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taxes

would

unfair

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be unfair

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to fast-

food

'

company

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companies

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and impact negatively

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the economic

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economic

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economy

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.

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, it

is widely know

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that not only fast

food

that unhealthy and harms

to

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people

but

also

energy drinks, snacks and desserts.

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,

this

company is

the

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huge factor

on

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economic growth

such

as KFC.

For instance

, if

government

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the government

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increases

taxes

,

critizen

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citizen

citizens

do not have

power

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to buy.

This

will completely reduce the income that

government

will get

form

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from

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taxes

from consumers.

Therefore

,

this

make

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it clear that

government

will never

be went

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up

taxes

. To summarize, the two sides of the

argument

concerning the

increasing

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of

taxes

have strong support.

However

, after

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thorough

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through

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thorough

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analysis of both sides, it is clear that the ideal that illustrates the

government

should ould not increased

taxes

can not be supported. It is

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, therefore,

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therefore

predicted that

positive

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the positive

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effects of imposing

a

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higher

taxes

on fast

food

will always be greater than

negative

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the negative

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effects, and

this

,

government

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the government

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should control

this

problem.