Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

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growth process,whereas going to
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will explore
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sides of the coin and give my opinion.
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is considered one of the best methods of taking our children to
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in itself is flexible for
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does not apply.Currently with the emergence of Covid-19
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will and is the best option for now because
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protecting
the learner and the teacher from contracting and spreading the disease.
On the other hand
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attendance
looks ancient in the modern world its good for the learner since it creates some level of
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independence
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to play and some level of discipline is instilled in them. To conclude, In my
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is important but
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independence
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the pupils/students allowing the parent
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their parenting work right and not incorporating
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Tailored learning
  • peer pressure
  • flexibility
  • instill values
  • socialization
  • communication skills
  • specialized facilities
  • extracurricular activities
  • diversity
  • structured environment
  • customized education
  • well-rounded education
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