Some experts suppose that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Citizens of developed countries have innumerable avenues to enjoy their
life
. While some people believe additional resources will add value to their already happy
life
, I think
otherwise
. Each additional dollar in a resident of a rich nation does not guarantee the chances of purchasing products that bring joy and pleasure to him.
To begin
with, after attaining a stable level of an economy, many residents may not feel delighted by seeing their country's advancement.
This
is because when a person satisfies his or her basic needs, the
next
level is to attain self-actualisation. For
this
, they have to find something to make them content,
for instance
, doing charity works, helping the needy or contributing to the well-being of the disadvantaged.
Therefore
, they could find the purpose of their
life
and joy in their actions. Another reason here is the lack of personal relationships.
In other words
, when a nation assists its people, they rarely require support from their family and slowly and gradually blood relationships can be blemished.
However
,
for example
, during their younger age, they could chase all the luxuries and achievements but, it has been noticed that these people often end up in a depressive mood in their later years.
Thus
, by viewing all these, it is clear that the economic progress of a nation may not bring happiness to its residents. To conclude, extra padding of money to spend on things other than necessities of
life
will not increase a person’s satisfaction.
Such
an increase in happiness can be achieved through the fulfilment of jobs as well as family reunions.
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