Some people say that public libraries should be free; otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the Internet allow easy access to resources.​ Discuss and give your point of view.​

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Reading stories told through black ink on white paper is one of the favourite pastimes of most
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. For the millions of
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around the world who love to read
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are an important place. Many individuals think that
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should have free access to
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and
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in it;
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, others, including myself, believe that
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should pay for
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. A number of advocates against paid
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believe that
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trend causes crisis to the
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. If
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departments require payment for
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and a quiet place to read, the number of visitors decreases a lot and
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will start to read
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with the help of the internet where the free access to a lot of
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in electronic version can be found. Nowadays, the infamous coronavirus is still spreading across the globe and during the quarantine, many
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lovers could read quite a lot of
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at their home finding the online versions of them.
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, the payment for the library gives the person not only access to any
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in that
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department
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the quiet place where that individual can read in peace.
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, if
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is paying for the
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,
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thing gains importance for the reader, as
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person does not want a waste of money. For these reasons, I strongly believe that
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should be paid. In conclusion, the fees for
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are worth the money paid.
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have to charge money for
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the
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in them may lose value in the future.
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