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Universities should accept equal number of male and female student in every subject

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The society and educational system have changed significantly since the old era where it was impossible for girls to study at university but boys were allowed to do so. Now the society has changed for the good and girls are allowed to get the education and they can enrol in any educational institution of their choice. I don’t agree with the opinion that universities should accept an equal number of male and female
students
 in every
subject
.
Firstly
, the main aim of an educational institution is to educate the person and make them ready to lead the future of our country. But if we will put the discrimination in
this
, how youngsters will lead the future of the country. If the
admission
 process prioritizes sentiments and starts taking the same number of
students
 in every
subject
, it would not be a good idea for the future of the country. Even if there are more females in any stream but
admission
 should be done on basis of talent.
Secondly
,
admission
 should be done mainly on the basis of academic progress and merit. If male and female
students
 are forced to accept the same
subject
then
 it will be the whimsical idea that would deprive many talented male
students
. Again education should be given according to youngster’s choice and their wish if we forced them to accept equal
subject
 they will be deprived of learning their area of an interesting
subject
 and they will never perform well in academics. They will lose the freedom of choosing their own
subject
 and dream. In conclusion, it should be the main aim of educational institutions to give full freedom to
students
 to choose their subjects. The idea of universities accepting the same number of male and female
students
 is not good and the
admission
 process should be strictly based on academic progress and merit.
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