Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games together is a good way to build closer relationships. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
To begin
with
some people believe that there is no relation between playing together and creating a strong bond. I personally, do not agree with that point and think Add a comma
,with
this
type of colse
exploser can help to build a solid relationship. I consider Correct your spelling
close
aforementioned
way for two reasons that I will explore in the ensuing essay.
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the aforementioned
First
of all, it will give a Correct your spelling
chance
change
to spend more Correct your spelling
chance
time
together and know about each other, my personal experience is a compelling illustration. For example
, ten years ago when I was in my village, I used to spend most of my time
with a young boy. He is a very good person. One day, I was palying
beside the pond and accidentally, I fall into the pond. It is worth mentioning, Correct your spelling
playing
lying
this
time
I did not know how to swim, but it was my good luck, the boy without caring himself
he jump to the pond to rescue me. With Change preposition
for himself
lot
of struggle I Add an article
a lot
able
to survive Add a missing verb
was able
this
dangerous situation for this
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apply
accident
he is my Add a comma
,accident
most
closest friend. In light of the foregoing, I feel that playing games together helps to strengthen relationships.
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Furthermore
, it helps to improve the posibility
to come closer through tackling bad situations or problems of each other. Correct your spelling
possibility
For instance
, when I was in university, I had a friend who used to play Add an article
the game
a game
game
with me. One day I found for some reason he facing Fix the agreement mistake
games
financial
problem, but he directly did not share it Correct article usage
a financial
to
anyone. Change preposition
with
However
, I was
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also indirectly lent
also
indirectly lend him some money which helped him to overcome his situation, which made our relationship more
stronger. If I could not get Change the word
apply
a
opportunity through sports, he would not be my best friend.
To sum up, playing together is one of the most Change the article
an
benefical
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beneficial
way
to make bonds stronger because it Change to a plural noun
ways
give
plenty of Change the verb form
gives
time
to know each other and oppotunities
to come foreword in difficulties.Correct your spelling
opportunities
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