In some parts of the world, the rate of divorce has increased dramatically over the past few decades. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

In some parts of the world, the rate of

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has increased dramatically over the past few decades. Explain some possible reasons for

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problem and suggest some solutions The number of

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divorce

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has risen significantly over the past years.

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I'm going to explain in detail two of them and give some possible solutions. The

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reason that may have caused an increase in

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rate is the social and psychological devolution that our society has faced after the

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world war. What

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mean is that people are less and less devoted to

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solid and tight relationships to the extent that even something once reckoned as unbreakable now is considered temporary.

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I can see everyday couples yelling at each other without trying to find a solution. Another reason is the emancipation that fortunately women all over the world have experienced after the sixties. In fact, women as wives have gained far more self

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, so that now they don't stand

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aggressive behaviour by their husbands or a subordinated relationship as well.

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my grandmother was far more reluctant than my mother to establish herself and in front of my grandfather. Considering these reasons I personally think that in order to slow down or even invert the

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trend, society as a whole should be more

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we should be more confident in creating durable relationships.

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, men should be more supportive and respectful of their partners, ensuring more modernity and parity in the rapport. In conclusion,

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rate is increasing worldwide due to the evolution

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relationships and women emancipation.

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, people and

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problem.