Universities should allocate the same amount of money to sports activities as they do allocate to the libraries To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that

sport

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activities at

universities

are equally important to libraries and must have the same allocation of funds as

this

service .In my opinion , I completely agree with

this

view and I think that improving

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sport

facilities may provide valuable advantages to

students

.

Firstly

, playing sports at

universities

can help

students

to be in good health and avoid many diseases. If reading books can contribute to the growth of mindset and building deep and a wide

knowldege

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knowledge

,

practicing

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physical exercise will help scholars to improve their body strength and being in

a

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good heath .

As a result

, they will avoid many

willness

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wellness

and being lazy and tired all times and

therefore

, they will more active and effective in their study and the chances to be successful academically will be

more

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higher.

For example

, many

researches

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demonstrated that

palying

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playing

physical activity decreases the risks of

diabete

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diabetes

and heart attack.

That is

why investing in

sport

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facilities at

universities

can be valuable as in libraries .

Secondly

,

this

approach can help youngers to avoid many mental health problems and

then

be effective in their study and

also

in their personal life .

In other words

, playing physical activity remains one of the

way

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of entertainment and having some fun which

important

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to release and detox

mind

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from the negativity and the stress .

Consequently

, they will be able to fulfil a number of key functions and activities,

such

as, the ability to feel, express and manage a range of positive and negative emotions and

also

the ability to form and maintain good relationships with others.

Thus

,

this

approach can help

students

to stay positive and avoid many mental disorders

such

as depression and anxiety . In conclusion,

although

that libraries

universities

may have

a

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various benefits to

students

, I believe that

also

sport

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facilities is essential because it helps them to improve their physical and mental health.