The protection of environment is most important issue in the world today, but governments are not doing enough about it. To what extent do you think individuals can help to protect the environment?

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In today past faced life environmental ,problems and deterioration of the environment are the most dominant

issues

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around the world. Worldwide harms from

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conundrum are not sustainable. In

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common individuals cannot solve it yet their daily routine works and way of life impact these

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to make it imperfect and superior. In my ,

oppinion

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opinion

governances

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should take steps to promote awareness among residents as well as take wide-reaching purposes to fight global environmental

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. Commencing with, there are numerous reasons attributed to the harms environment . The

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and foremost construction of industries, buildings and development of factories are increasing high .

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to global

warming

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act

banned

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because it causes vigorous diseases like skin cancer. Administrations took several initiatives regarding

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issue but without the contribution of any ,individual anyone cannot solve

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problem.

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, the usage of air conditioning at an alarming rate which lead to global warming in the modern era.

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, the governments should prohibit public vehicles and ask for everyone

use

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only public transport. It improves the economic position of the country and they invest more funds on environmental

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, administrations cancelled the license of factories that are producing dangerous chemicals into rivers and ponds.

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, administrations make restrictions that every industry needs to generate renewable energy for their machines or continue their producing materials . In conclusion, governments should take action against these factories and awarding the individuals by organising more environmental

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related events to protect our environment.

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, it is to promote by all means

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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The protection of environment is most important issue in the world today, but governments are not doing enough about it. To what extent do you think individuals can help to protect the environment?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You recently registered for a course and you cannot attend the class for some reasons. Write a letter to your course instructor, and in your letter Introduce yourself. Explain the situation. and say what action you would like to take.

People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter: describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it, tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.