Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others disagree. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

It is generally believed that extremal activities are needed to be removed at all, whilst other

people

think controversially.

This

essay completely disagrees with the statement. In my opinion, these kinds of

sports

present to individuals

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tons of pleasant emotions and usually danger of them are largely overestimated by

people

.

Firstly

, risky

sports

are considered to be funny and interesting entertainment.

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people

desire to visit these types of places, where there is an amazing atmosphere to feel amused by what are they doing.

In addition

, our organism requires these activities

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done because of the pleasure that the brain gets. The good example for

this

is the hormones like

such

as adrenalin, serotonin and dopamine which makes human to be on cloud nine.

Secondly

, the hazards of dangerous

sports

are widely exaggerated even though they consist of myriads of sorts of

sport

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activities, so everybody has a magnificent opportunity to pick up one of them that seems to be the most fascinating.

For instance

, my father occasionally climbs the mountains of Alatau in order to ski in the winter. He always used to take his younger fellow workers there and share us with the experiences because it was quite

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. To conclude, dangerous

sports

are thought to be one of the

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of human happiness and

also

it is not as so hazardous as

people

think.