Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

It has become more common for

museums

to

charge

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fee

. It is my view that the benefits of charging

visitors

for admission to

museums

outweigh the drawbacks. When

museums

charge

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for admission, The administration of

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museum

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could provide better facilities to their

visitors

.

For instance

, they must keep antiquities,

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and washrooms

on

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better condition.

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should be

charge

from

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their tourists.

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to

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the administration can hire more knowledgeable guiders to provide accurate information about the antiquities on display.

Moreover

, They could recruit people to babysit for the couples who want to enjoy the

museum

without getting disturbances from their babies.

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to

this

, they could invest the charging fund in

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and necessary equipment for

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persons. Obviously, there

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large

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number of

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for charging

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. As we all know, the

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fund is more stable than the donations from patrons. The donations

are vary

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on the

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and

country’s

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economy. As a consequence, the

museum

cannot

be maintain

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properly. It will be caused to decrease

the

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number of

visitors

who come to enjoy the

museum

. Needless to say, the most famous

museums

in the world

charge

a

fee

to

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entry

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. To wrap up, there are more benefits than drawbacks of charging a

fee

for admission. The affordable

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provide

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better

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experience to

visitors

and

museum

can increase their income of

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fee

.