Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only; others, however, feel that cell phones should be used mostly for work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the advent of technology, nowadays, a large number of
people
in this
world are using mobile phones
for both their personal and professional purposes
, creating some problems when individuals cannot balance and maintain their phone calls at home and workplaces. Resultantly, whereas some people
assert that phones
ought to be used mostly for job purposes
, others contend that cell
phones
should be used for personal communications. I, too, wholeheartedly feel that cell
phones
should be used only for personal purposes
in that business clients
can communicate through emails.
Inasmuch as employees, in this
day and age, must have to connect with their suppliers, customers, and other stakeholders all time in order to survive in this
dog-eat-dog world, they must have to use
their personal phones
. To be more precise, if staff did not use
their phones
mostly for works, it would not be possible for them to maintain a smooth relationship with external parties and do their task smoothly. To cite an example, an empirical study conducted by Oxford University reveals that companies’ productivity of every country has increased by 20% when employees started to do their tasks with others through phone callings. Thus
, people
should use
their phones
mainly for works so as to remain competitive.
Plausible though using cell
phones
for work purposes
is helpful to contact clients
easily, it is worth arguing that phones
should be used for personal communications. This
is because, clients
and other parties should communicate with emails to create an authentic document, but in the case of personal communication such
a type of documentation is not needed. Moreover
, through a phone, it is more comfortable to talk or send messages to loved ones, giving the user a sense of satisfaction. To exemplify, researchers of Cambridge University have found that 90% of workers can give their best output when they are able to talk with their families during a break. Hence
, with a view to bringing happiness, people
should use
their phones
for personal purposes
.
In conclusion, much as it is easy to communicate with clients
through mobile phones
, it cannot give satisfaction. Therefore
, individuals should only use
cell
phones
for communications.Submitted by shawlin90 on
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