Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In 20 years there will be less pollution in the air than there is today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

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air
polution
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pollution
is one of the main
consern
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concern
concerns
of present days. Personally, I believe in future
this
pollution will be lower than
recent
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times. I think
aforementioned
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way for two reasons that I will explore in the ensuing essay.
First
of all,
people
are now becoming more conscious
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past. Many social organizations are helping to reach out the knowledge what is the problem we can face for air pollution which is working in many places. My personal experience is a compelling illustration.
For example
, when I was
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kid, I saw in our village,
people
used to make
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in
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any happy occasions to know other
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their happiness is enlightening like fire. One day we found, some
people
came to us to discuss
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something
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some thing
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, and they gave
a
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eloquent lecture on
air-pollution
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air pollution
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.
Although
we were conscious about nature, we did not know we worsening our environment. So, from the day we never do
such
kind of thing. In light of the foregoing, I consider, If
this
type of
orgainzations
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organizations
did not present we would not aware of that, and
also
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that in
twently
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twenty
years
more and more foundations like it, would help
people
to aware.
Secondly
,
internationl
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international
orgainzations
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organizations
and
the
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governments taking
actions
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action
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to tackle the issue.
For instance
, five to six
years
ago in our area we saw, a lot of persons used unfit transports, produce large amount air-
polutant
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pollutant
pollutants
, for their transportation, as those are cheap to buy.
However
, in recent
years
we see that
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government
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enforced some laws to punish them.
Good
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news is that steps really forced
people
to use fit and
environmentaly
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environmentally
friendly transport.
As a result
, I feel in
future
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the future
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government will
encouraged
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more to come forward to overcome
this
type of situation. To sum up, in twenty
years
air pollution will reduce down than
present
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at present
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because
people
have more knowledge about
environment
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the environment
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and
goverments
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governments
government
helping to ameliorate the situation.
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