Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In today world, some citizens prefer to be their own boss and act for themselves
instead
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working for public companies.
This
situation has both pros and cons that I will be discussed. On the one hand, some
people
want to run their own business which
earn
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lots of
salary
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. I mean, when they work for companies they have a steady income and never can purchase expensive goods or go
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an ideal journey.
In addition
,
people
want to modify their situation and become more successful.
For instance
, my father had worked for
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factory for 12 years .He was unsatisfied
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work
condition
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namely hours, holiday entitlement and income.
Then
he decided to change his career, take risks and become
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.Now, he has
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job satisfaction and
receive
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high money.
On the other hand
, other citizens function for companies which can increase their experience with working by expert colleagues.
Moreover
, they have someone to help them, if something unexpected problem
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.
However
, when
people
work for public organizations they have to follow some laws
such
as time management, wear tidy clothes.
Furthermore
, some
people
do not like these laws or think that they stick behind the desk .So they think is a time to change and operate their own business. In conclusion, both arguments have positive and negative aspects that I mentioned before but the important factor for every person is salary. If they do not have
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job satisfaction or average income, it will be better to modify their job.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employed
  • company
  • organization
  • freedom
  • independence
  • income potential
  • flexibility
  • working hours
  • working location
  • passions
  • interests
  • decision-making
  • business practices
  • disadvantages
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