Today more people are shopping online than ever before. Why do people choose to shop in this way? Are there disadvantages to shopping online?

Nowadays, purchasing
products
from the Internet has become a trend and a number of citizens do it.
People
select
this
kind of shopping for some reasons,
however
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this
situation brings some cons that I will explain them. The main reason that
people
elect online shopping is
time
management; my point is in these days, all humans are busier than past they do not have much
time
, and they are in hurry.
Consequently
, they prefer to choose online shopping to reduce their waste
time
rather than browse in the boutiques or window-shopping. The
second
issue is
a
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variety of goods that
community
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can buy I mean,
people
can select a wide range of equipment from around the world just by their credit card.
For instance
, Amazon is one of the well-known chain
stores
that
has
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various
products
and
people
around the world can purchase their
favorite
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good
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just by registering on the website and pay the
products
.
As a result
,
people
prefer to buy online
shops
for saving
time
and choice a variety of
products
.
On the other hand
, buying
products
from online
stores
have some drawbacks.
Firstly
, when citizens obtain goods from popular online
stores
some retail outlets or local markets have to eliminate. Due to, local
shops
do not make a profit, and they become bankrupt so they remove their business.
Secondly
, when
people
pick up
products
from online markets they do not make sure
buy
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genuine equipment. Despite the fact that paying too much on the original good and do not see it
then
, they receive a fake one.
In addition
, some online
shops
have fake accounts maybe they do not exist either but
people
order
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goods and pay the money
also
never
reach
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on their
products
.
Furthermore
, if
people
want to use online
shops
, they should select famous
stores
and it would be better for them. In summary, many
people
prefer to purchase their
products
in
the
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online
stores
because saving
time
is significant for them .
Although
this
situation
make
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some negative aspects, that I mentioned previously.
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