You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I, Paulami Sanyal, a student of 2nd year of college, am currently sharing a
room
with one of my classmates. She is from a different stream. We have been sharing this
room
for the last
year.
Her time of study
does not match with mine. She prefers to study
mostly at night so the room
’s lights are on during this
time. While I prefer to wake up early in the morning and rest during the night. Hence
my rest time is being compromised. Also
she has a habit of playing loud music and inviting friends into the Add a comma
,Also
room
. This
also
hampers my study
. Somehow I managed to perform well in my 1st-year examination but it will definitely impact the study
of the next
year.
So I would like to request you to kindly change my room
if possible. I would prefer the single room
as it will be ideal for me to concentrate more on my study
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toilet would be great.
Thank you very much in advance. Awaiting your response.
With Regards,
Paulami SanyalCorrect article usage
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite