Some students take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is observed that some people prefer to travel and getting employed after completing schooling rather than attending college immediately.

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essay illustrates how people benefited from

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trend to getting practical

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but will

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show that

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can lead to

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as students may lose their interest in

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studies.

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with, when youngsters start working anywhere, they

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their bookish

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in actual work and learned concepts in a new way.

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will not only help them for gaining practical experience but

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help them

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earn money and finance their

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education.

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, my elder brother took a one year gap before taking admission

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the university and joined an internship at

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organization to explore practical

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,

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made him

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find

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easily and motivated him to make a career in his dream field.

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, there are some problems that are significant,

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, there are high chances that if students take a gap in their studies, they may start losing interest in their studies. Since they are

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earn money, they will addict to it and they can decide to continue with their

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instead

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enroll

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for

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their course.

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, if they

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their desired

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in a gap,

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they feel demotivated and stressed.

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as, my relative daughter failed to find

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job

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in her interest

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apply

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area

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and she felt demotivated and depressed. To conclude,

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it gives chance to explore practical

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and earn money to finance their education,

but

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disadvantages of

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trend outweigh the advantages. I believe that

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trend can be considered

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positive

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development.