Some people believe that our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Personalities are related to our genes

thus

cannot be altered,

this

is a

believe

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belief

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of some people whereas others think

otherwise

. Character is developed, and

therefore

it is

natured

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natural

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as we grow nobody is born by ,

for example

being apologetic,the environment that one is raised from cultivates good or bad morals.

Lately

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the young generation have cultivated personalities that they have mostly not learnt from their homes or from parents but by what they see on media platforms,a culture of not respecting the old has been introduced by

this

generation whereby at one time you will hear them plotting to kill the elderly in pretence they are witches,

these

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there

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is

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are

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very common in my country in counties of coast and

nyanza

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Nyanza

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.

On the other hand

,changing a person's personality is not a walk in the park because most of

this

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these

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traits are not developed but acquired,there are people who are generally

quite

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quiet

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and that's a character, and cannot be changed,it's un inborn thing whereas there are those that are acquired because of one reason or the other. In a

nutshell

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personalities are different to each individual and the determining factor could be the place of birth and growing up.