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Some people say that students who achieve the highest scores in their exams should be rewarded. Others say that those who show progress should be rewarded instead. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #students #scores #exams #show #progress
Education is the most crucial
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 of people's lives. Some people are firm believers in rewarded the
higest
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highest
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the most progress.
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this
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view
 and will examine my opinion. The
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 and most obvious reason is most students who get the highest grades eager to learn
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academic
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knowledge
, leading to self-study and
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autonomous
 learning after school. The rationale behind
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 is their parent encourage and set up the goal for them so they have a clear goal to
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achieve
.
However
, some students just only have the talent in memorizing the lessons which easier to get
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 higher grade than the normal student.
On the other hand
, many people said that
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 who
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 the greatest increase should get the reward
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because
 these scores reflect their passions. According to
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local university research, it indicates that more than 80
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 of top rank's students get higher
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scores
 because of their
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assiduous
.
Moreover
, talent is a part of
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achieve
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 is an
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integral
 part to become successful. In conclusion, both choices have some
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advantages
 and disadvantages in
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 situation. From my perspective, the formal examination can not
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 that they are working hard. If
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students
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dedicate
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themsleves
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themselves
 to do
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their
 best in
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exam
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, they will get some rewards not only by the gift but
also
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cabal
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Thus
, these rewards will be
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 moral support to do the better result in the future.
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