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Nowadays people get married and have children after the age of 30. Is it a positive or negative development?

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One of the highly controversial issues today relates to life. These days, people tend to make a family or get
a
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marriage
with
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 their partner after 30 years old. In my opinion,
this
 is a positive development because of two reasons.
To begin
 with, it is clear that they can save enough money to support their children.
This
 means that
parents
 have to spend a lot of money for their kids as making perfect supports.
For example
, when
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child
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go
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 to extra
school
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such
 as playing sports or learning languages,
parents
 ought to take a lot of costs for them. As a research, the cost of education until graduated university,
parents
 should spend at least $10000 per a year. As the result,
parents
 can do good preparation on purpose until they get married.
Moreover
, there is no doubt that
they
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 persons are able to do whatever they want until 30.
This
 is because some campaign’s age limitation is average until thirty years old.
For instance
,
working
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 holiday which can apply within 20 to 30 years old and it can participate in at once in their life.
In addition
,
parents
 need to take care of their child
whole
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days
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. As for
this
, they do not make
a
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time to do their
favorite
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 activities.
Hence
, they do not want to waste
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 free time while they can play it without
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. To sum up, marriage and having
child
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 after
age
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 of 30 have some benefits to save money and have
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 energy to play activities.
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