Nowadays, many people send their children to boarding schools so that they can have time to work. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

One of the parental practices that

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become more common in recent years is sending descendants to boarding

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. The main reason for

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is allocating more time to work with the absence of

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at home. There

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of benefits as well as drawbacks to be considered,

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as far as I am concerned, boarding

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do more harm in general. On the one hand, boarding

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to have positive impacts on the lives of both

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and

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alike.

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, not having to take care of kids at home will allow

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to focus on their professional life better;

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, they can earn more income which benefits the entire family.

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, at boarding

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pupils are taught to

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discipline

their lifestyle. Unlike regular

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where most of the focus is on the students' academic learning, at boarding

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much wider range of skills are learnt.

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, young people have the chance to deal with more difficult challenges in life by staying away from the comfort of family and hometown which will teach them vital life lessons before their adolescence.

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, there are undeniable personal and parental issues that could arise from sending

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to study away from home.

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of all, kids, especially below twelve years old, need sufficient attention and intimacy; something

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hard to find in any boarding school. No matter how

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and amiable the school teachers and staff are, they can never replace the role

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play in raising

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.

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, all the stress and difficulties students have to face at boarding

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may result in trauma in their adulthood.

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, many

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do not comprehend the reason behind being sent off to another city to study

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and only seeing their family for short holidays.

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misunderstandings might affect the relationship between

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and

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. To summarize, many

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nowadays are deciding to

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their

children

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in boarding

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in order to have more free time to spend on their careers. In my opinion, while both

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and descendants gain certain advantages from

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decision, the negative implications it could have on the mental health of the

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as well as family unity

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are far

greated

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greater

than the benefits.