You and a friend have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, France. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •Congratulate him/her for also being accepted •Ask him/her if he/she would like to be your roommate •Discuss possible activities that the two of you could do together Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,
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Dear Victoria,
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I want to ask you if you would like to be my roommate there. I believe it would be immensely beneficial for us in various aspects. Linking Words
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, As we are childhood friends we would not struggle to adjust to each other . We can do numerous activities together like cooking , and watching movies Linking Words
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, we can share our all worries and feelings. One of the key benefits is going out together as we are shopholic. I highly recommend you to live together But ,the Linking Words
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Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Raman Sandhu.Linking Words
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suitable writing tone
Try to maintain a more formal tone throughout the letter.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single idea for better clarity.
logical structure
Use a variety of linking words to enhance the logical structure.
complete response
The letter effectively covers all the points required by the task.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriate and create a friendly tone.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite