In Some areas of The US, A Curfew Is Imposed In Which Teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?
On the basis of threats faced by teenagers when they are outside their home, The US put a restriction for youth below 20 to be at home after a specific time or they can go outside with an adult. In my opinion,
this
can have some positive effects on reducing crimes on teenagers but certain drawbacks are also
associated with this
.
Following this
law, undoubtedly, crime
rate Correct article usage
the crime
happened
Correct pronoun usage
that happened
with
young people can be reduced drastically. Change preposition
to
For instance
, kidnapping, rape, looting cases etc. must have been fallen down. It may enhance the sense of security in youths as they know that they are not alone. Up to certain age
it is necessary that they are being supervised by their parents while going outside Add a comma
,age
in
Change preposition
at
night
.
Add an article
the night
On the other hand
, we cannot deny the fact that freedom is constitutional
right of all humans. Adolescents below 20 years of age are having equal Add an article
the constitutional
a constitutional
right
to move freely out of their Fix the agreement mistake
rights
home
even Fix the agreement mistake
homes
in
Change preposition
at
nights
. It is Fix the agreement mistake
night
Government
responsibility to ensure their safety. Correct article usage
the Government
Furthermore
, to make our youths more responsible and independent, they should not be restricted by any such
law else it will hamper their growth. To illustrate this
, in case a kid in his teenage is always go
outside with his parents Change the verb form
is always going
in
Change preposition
at
night
Add an article
the night
then
he will never understand what precautions he need
to take for his safety. His mind will never allow him to make strong and active.
To sum up the above point, Change the verb form
needs
such
constraints are acceptable up to a certain age limit but it
should not be applicable for all teenagers. In my opinion, Correct pronoun usage
they
right
to freedom is necessary for all and Correct article usage
the right
thus
this
law should be withdrawn.Submitted by BHAWNATOMAR28 on
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