In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
Nowadays technologies enable us to read news and writing on any electrical device without extra cost than internet running fee. Printed editions of
newspapers
and books
are dying out soon. I totally agree with that. We can keep thousands of publication
or hundreds of articles within a hand-size cellphone. Fix the agreement mistake
publications
Also
digital versions of them are more environmentally friendly. No more deforestation from making papers.
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books
and newspapers
have many advantages. One of them is easy to use and reach. They need just tiny space to be stored in computer, tablet, mobile phone or e-reader made them available at anytime
anywhere. You can be more concentrated on a specific writing field you would like to read. Replace the word
any time
Such
as Amazon’s e-reader “Kindle”. It takes a few seconds to connect an Amazon’s database via internet wifi and then
you can search for endless titles of topics you are looking for.
Digital books
and newspapers
are more environmentally friendly than traditional printed ones. The cost of manufacturing and printing are completely removed which reduced a publishing house’s production cost. No paper is used to print magazines and books
which means fewer trees are cut from our forests to produce papers. Water treatment after the printing process also
needs because water contaminated from ink waste is harmful to water resources. The process of printing is time-consuming for the printed newspaper before headlines are published which made a publisher able to update new pieces of information only once or twice a day while the news is happening around the world every second
. For example
, The New Yorker updates an article with recent information that coming almost every hour. In addition
, they are reducing costs for online sub-scriber by almost 30% compare with monthly printed issue costs.
In conclusion, I believe that amount of books
and newspapers
are printed will decrease considerably. All of these factors convinced many people that digital versions of text is
more convenient and cheaper choices. Printing a huge amount of articles daily and weekly and monthly will demand additional resources and make them less competitive even in terms of price.Change the verb form
are
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite