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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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It has been observed that solar
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 is very popular
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all over the globe for domestic purposes
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 because it is the most renewable resource of
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 it is eco-friendly and a better alternative to other forms of
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. There is a number of benefits as well as drawbacks of solar panels. Both the aspects are elaborated
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 the following paragraphs. Analysing the brighter side of the solar system, the foremost one is, it only required the rays of the sun and is very simple. ,
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 it is clean and does not pollute the land and air quality.
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, it has batteries so we can store extra
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 for use at night. It can be installed very easily anywhere.
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, people can install solar panels on their rooftop or terrace and generate an adequate amount of
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 to run their home appliances
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 as fans, lights, refrigerators, television and so on.
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, there are some darker sides of sun
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 plants are very expensive, it cannot be afforded by people who belong to low-income groups.
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, the panels of the solar system consume a large area for the insert.
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, another drawback of
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 system is that many foreign countries cannot use solar
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 because it requires more heat to generate electricity.
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, foreign countries are cold and receive only a small amount of sunlight.
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, not much solar
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 can be generated there. To conclude, solar
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 gaining more popularity because it is safe, convenient and pollution-free,
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 due to advancing technology.
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, it has some limitations which putting off its global usage.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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