Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
One
of the highly controversial issues today relates to population. There are one
of the worldwide problems in the centre of the city that is
overcrowded. In this
essay, I will explain the reasons and suggest solutions.
One
of the first
problems is overpopulation that leads to some issues. First
of all, the rural areas can not develop. Recently, people
are likely to stay in urban cities because it is more convenient than living countryside. For instance
, a slow network and that place can not buy food immediately, it might people
feels stress. Another issue that needs to be considered is that it might use a lot of electricity. This
is because that place has become hot. For example
, when a lot of people
gathered one
small shopping mole, the temperature of the floors became increase. As for this
, the shop must be used a strong air conditioner.
A possible solution to this
matter would be the government should give benefit for people
to stay rural places. This
means that when people
want to live there, the administration gives them some special aids. In particular
, the house fee is free. Hence
, the countryside has attractive to live in and residence will get incline in the future. In addition
, the buildings have to equip veneration. It can cost less than attach and cut down using electricity. As the result, it can connect to save the earth.
To sum up, there are the problems to not improve specific areas and overuse electricity. Whereas, there are solutions to provide good services and install better veneration systems.Submitted by ryohei.o532 on
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