University is the only way to success. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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’s bachelor appears as the exclusive route to accomplish life’s goals.

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there are more open knowledge, experience, and acquaintances for graduates, it cannot remain the one and the only path to reach success.

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, I cannot entirely agree with

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notion. Those who support the essential role of

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learning indicate the privilege of higher education

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as experiments and networks. In simple words, it exposes students to assignments and projects that require a deeper insight into their major and thereby opening the door to future achievements. Equally, universities offer an array of extra-curricular activities, clubs, like the human resources club or

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parties, for their students to get involved in, wherein they can network with new people, setting a milestone in an adult’s relationships. As follows, enrolling in

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not only enhances learners’ holistic development but more importantly, broadens their circle of networks, contributing to one’s accomplishment.

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, there are other pathways to success, vocational

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. In fact, few can deny that warranting in jobs is what

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excludes,

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graduates tend to have a wealth of knowledge about their major. Admittedly, Because of the providing theoretical studies tendency, many colleges ignore the practical ones without realizing the marginal impact performance brings.

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, training schools are the life-saver to those who require skills, passion and dedication, which are the brutal elements that can impress future employers or lead to

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successful career, comparing to the unrealistic curriculum of

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. A fine example can be seen in Steve Jobs, who is the founder of Apple company,

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out of college to pursue the real practice to gain real fortune. In conclusion, despite providing a worthy purpose for creating an academic area

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learners,

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appears

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guarantee in

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workforce. That

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I support enrolling the vocational courses or training academies to achieve the most entire development.