Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, many

people

claim that effort is the most crucial element contributing to a person’s success.

This

situation may seem like a fabulous opportunity, but there are

also

many potential downsides. On the one hand, telling youngsters to keep trying to get what they want has many benefits.

Firstly

, it will be motivation for the child to not give up.

Besides

,

this

helps

children

realize early to make an effort in the future.

As a result

, they may have better study opportunities than lazy

children

.

Furthermore

,

this

can encourage poor

children

to overcome difficulties.

For example

, when poor

children

can achieve anything they want to have a better life, they will try hard to get out of poverty. In spite of its advantages, some drawbacks still remain. The

first

disadvantage is that young

people

study or do too much, leading to stress and fatigue.

For instance

, a day should only be 10 hours, when studying beyond that limit will adversely affect the

children

’s health. Sometimes, they feel alone without any emotional support from relatives and friends because they spend most of their time studying.

Additionally

, not just working hard will achieve success, but it

also

depends on many other factors.

Therefore

, it seems that rich

people

can use the money to buy a career, it will not be fair to hardworking

people

. In conclusion, I believe the advantages of sufficient persistence outweigh the disadvantages if youngsters try their best, and

this

is a positive development to prevent negative aspects.