These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the world is developing day by day . there is an increasing amount of

violence

broadcasted on television these days.which is having a negative effect on

children

's

attitudes

.as

children

are very good learners, they are

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to what they see immediately. when they are watching destruction and

violence

on the screen they are learning from it very rapidly which reflects in their behaviour.

Therefore

, I completely agree with the

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statement

that watching

violence

on television has a bad impact on

children

's behaviour. The environment of the house is the biggest impact of the place for learning positive

attitudes

for

children

.

for instance

,

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if they see parents or siblings are fighting or blaming for each

others

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children

would learn from their parent's behaviours. their parent's characters are badly influenced for

children

's life .home is the place

children

could learn positive

attitudes

and good education background. when the parents behave positive

attitudes

in front of

children

they are never adapting negative behaviours.

On the other hand

,In recent

Tv

programmes are the biggest learning source for

children

when they telecasted bad content on

tv

channels definitely

children

are getting things from it.

tv

programmes could do turn

children

for good or bad behaviours.

For instance

,nowadays

TV

shows and cartoons

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with

violence

and fighting scenes.before one week in Sri Lanka one of the

tv

channel shows ,one school child was beaten his colleague because that child took his lunch box in the canteen .they can nicely solve

this

trouble through talking with each

others

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.But nowadays

children

are fighting for every matter. these

attitudes

they are taking from

TV

shows and fighting included cartoons . In conclusion ,negative changes in

children

's

attitudes

are due to the increasing amount of shows on

televisions

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reflects what they see on

tv

.the government and parents should need to decreased

this

changing

behavior

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to the positive side .