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- Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people.

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There is a modern trend, which is more using the
internet
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 to read
news
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, among youngsters because it can be the easiest way to stay updated fresh
news
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. But readers of paper-based
newspapers
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 are still a few out of there. It causes elder people don’t know much about modern technology and they haven’t enough abilities “how to access the
internet
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 and navigate accurate statements”.
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 and foremost, it is apparent that we are in a constant flux of the digital era,
therefore
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, individuals now utilize more electrical gadgets,
such
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 as laptops, mobile phones and so on, in their lifestyle compared to the past. And their demand and customer are rapidly increasing these days and people tend to use cellphones to find information and
news
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 due to the fact that they always take it anywhere and anytime apart from sleeping.
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, in my illustration, I almost don’t buy
newspapers
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 because I read all
news
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 on the official websites or pages on the
internet
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 through my computer and mobile phones.
Secondly
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, the
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, which are printed
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, are produced by trees. It is harmful to our environment, and we ought to reduce using paper in order to save nature and most people throw
newspapers
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 as soon as they read them.
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 the rubbish
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 are able to recycle, it is observable that lots of
newspapers
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 lose their quality and become with dirty things, after that these
papers
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 are unable for the recycling process. For Mongolia, reproducing level of used
newspapers
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 is poor, almost we can’t collect used
papers
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 and there are few
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’ recycling companies. All these concerns, I cannot stand the side which
newspapers
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 still remains their role in our society. I think most readers are moved into catching the
news
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 on the official websites and companies
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 show the same pattern as readers because they have given serious attention to their company social platforms on the
internet
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.
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