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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by the artificially intelligent robots? what is your opinion?

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In the midst of
this
 technology driven-global world,most of the manpower is replaced by artificially intelligent
robots
.Some believe that as time goes all of the manpower work will be replaced by artificially intelligent
robots
.In my opinion,not all the tasks can be done by
this
 type of robot,
however
 most of the works they can manage.
To begin
 with, as everyone knows that we are living in the 21st century.where technology has a significant role in the
day
 to
day
 life,to make our daily chores easier.Admittedly,
robots
 doing a great job even in the medical field.Nowadays,most medical surgeries are done by
robots
 which are called robotic surgery.
For instance
,even in my medical practice life, I have witnessed the same.Robotic surgery is done for renal stone removal.The result of
this
 robotic surgery is much higher than the manual one.The success rate is high and complications are less.At the same time,even for the space study, scientists sending
robots
 to space.
In addition
 to
this
, the agricultural sector is
also
 handled by
robots
.
For example
,previously hundreds of labours were working in
this
 agricultural field,whereas now only one robot or
such
 type of machine has taken over the work from labours.
As a result
,time can be saved with much more benefits.
On the other hand
,police officers and advocates activity may not be done by the
robots
.For court procedures, there should be direct questioning as well as cross-questioning depends upon victims or criminals statements , these all can't be managed by
robots
.Artificial intelligent
robots
 are tuned with some programmes so they can not be always active,they will be needed some recharge or reactivations,
hence
 we can not use them on a
day
 to
day
 basis for all-purpose. To conclude,Artificially intelligent
robots
 can do most of the tasks with some limitations, but they cannot do all of the works which humans can do.After all ,it is a man-made machine only,we cannot substitute it for all-purpose for what humans can do.
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