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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Nowadays new technologies have brought many new ways of trading in the market which change the lifestyle of
people
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. I totally agree with
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 statement, and the following examples will be provided to support my point of view. The most important reason is that there bring more convenience to the way of
people
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's life because shoppers can buy products anytime and anywhere by using a mobile application which has many options and offers.
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,
people
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 prefer to
order
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 goods from online services
than
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 go to shops. To explain
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 point, it is clearly seen in an urban society where there are working-age population mostly use e-commerce applications or websites to
order
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 whatever they need after working hours
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 of going to the supermarket on their own in
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 to save their time and more convenient. Another reason is that buyers will not be limited by using domestic products.
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 is because consumers can choose any merchandise from worldwide, whereas in the past could not do like
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.
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, according to the latest survey by Bangkok University, it has been reported that 90% of customers on the biggest trading application in Thailand tend to
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 international products which are likely to be cheaper even there need to take a longer time.
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 observation would be the one reason to change buyer and seller's behaviour in marketing in the present world. In conclusion, new technologies would bring more convenient and extended market which lead to different the way of consuming of
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such
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 as shopping at home, use delivery service to pick up food and so on.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transforming
  • consumers
  • buying and selling
  • new technologies
  • revolutionized
  • consumer experience
  • e-commerce
  • convenience
  • range of options
  • mobile payment systems
  • transactions
  • challenges
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