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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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this
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 contemporary world, there are many ways of getting
information
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. Some people opine that the best way to approach news is the newspaper while others believe that there are other
media
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. In my point of view,
newspapers
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 are one way among the many effective methods of getting
information
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. On the bright side,
newspapers
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 are easier for conventional or senior readers to acquire
information
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. While technology advances are hardly adopted by the elderly,
newspapers
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 can easily be bought in a post office, grocery store and so on. Another advantage of
newspapers
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 is because of their own material. Many people would rather read
newspapers
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 than staring at smart devices.
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, their eyes would be easier to read on paper than reading on screen. We cannot bear the favour of reading
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. Turn to the other side of the argument, other
media
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 will bring more variety of news and
information
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. Using a smartphone with unlimited access to the internet, users can acquire a wide range of
information
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, from entertainment to urgent matters. Another merit of using smart devices is their free accessibility.
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, to have a piece of newspaper, you must pay a huge amount of money each year. But with the advantage of the internet, almost everything is free and published to everyone.
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, some of the news on other
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 can be brought to us in a more interesting way. They could be included with coloured pictures and videos, some newspaper pages include a comment section to discuss the topic of the article. For all the aforementioned benefits of both ways of acquiring
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, they have different aspects that are better than others. In my perspective, absorbing
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 from other
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 could be more beneficial than traditional
newspapers
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.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • news coverage
  • perspectives
  • opinions
  • accessed
  • interactive
  • engaging
  • real-time
  • multimedia
  • combination
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