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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have the opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development

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Traditionally it was common for
students
 to enrol and graduate from their local
universities
,
however
, these days they have more opportunities available for studying abroad. There are some benefits to
students
 travelling to other countries,
such
 as being able to
study
 and learn from the best
Universities
 in the world, learn about other cultures but
also
 there are drawbacks to
this
such
 as expensive costs and homesickness. On the one hand, the increased possibility, for
students
 to
study
 abroad gives them a greater chance to fully exploit their potential and intelligence by studying at the best
universities
 in the world. Once in
this
 kind of ,University the investment of the government to train the best professionals is better than in the local
Universities
. Another benefit of studying in a city or country other than where the
students
 were born is the possibility to learn another culture that involves, in most cases, learning new languages, traditions and culture.
Consequently
, people tend to be more creative and respectful.
On the other hand
,
study
 abroad for a long time in degrees or PHD courses have many drawbacks.
Firstly
, the
students
 need to deal if themselves and their daily difficulties without the presential support of their parents. Because of ,that the level of stress that they have during their studies is enormous and some
students
 often give up on their courses because of homesickness.
Second
 is the expensive costs that the family need to have to maintain the student abroad, as the majority of the case is not only the tuition cost involves but
also
 the rental costs. In conclusion, after a thorough analysis of it, we can understand that
although
 there are some negative sides to
study
 abroad. I believe that the advantages of
this
 issue outweigh the disadvantages.
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