Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.

There is no doubt that when

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is strong, nothing is impossible. When the desire is weak

failure

is for sure. I completely agree with

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statement

failure

is proof that the desire wasn't strong enough. Analyzing the

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thorough

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preparation

and a tough intention to get

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success

access

will prove

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.

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, it is important to set a tough intention to

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because when the purpose is clear, a set of

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and hard work will result in achievement. Alone performing and following steps can not

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pursue

the destination

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even though

an aspiration is shaky.

Furthermore

, there is a saying

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makes

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perfect, so does apply here when there is

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goal, one should take proper steps

such

as research, plan and

practice

and

finally

get success.

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some one

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wants to win dance a

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competition

they should set their high level of interest

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dance, and take

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steps towards competition.

Secondly

, when in the many

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was not sufficient to realize the aim, it is understandable that the purpose was not strong enough to achieve. A deficient

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does not attract positive energy so it

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to

failure

. A

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neglected

wish never

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gained despite

of

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series of effort and time investment.

For instance

, an individual who

want

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to be a doctor but his is not well

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intended

to served people

instead

he was just in love writing 'doctor' word

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in front

of his name led him to

practice

less and eventually, he

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the final exam. In conclusion, in my opinion, despite

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enough

practice

and process, a fancy intention can not

be achieve

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since

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failure

is the symbol of inferior desire.

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when

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well intended

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craving

this

will come true no matter what exercises and how much money and time have to invest.