Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,
such
as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. While some people argue that it is better to try and improve such
situations. From my point of view
both perspectives are reasonable and acceptable.
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