Some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of the death penalty and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Violent crimes have led to serious penalties in
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recent times ,whereas other
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should be scrapped out.
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and disadvantages and a conclusion.
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penalty has not started today
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began way back as a way of
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that goes if you kill
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a weapon you too shall die the same way there is no
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is not a simple one because it involves life and nobody has a right to take any
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penalty is mostly declared when one has committed the same crime , most of the time it is a
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to the
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seeking justice for their loved one ,
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the case of Floyd who was killed by the police
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family is still seeking justice and they will settle once the verdict has been declared.
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is not an easy thing especially for the family involved
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affects the well being of the family physically mentally and socially ,it is an advantage for the justice seekers and yes they deserve it but how about looking at both sides of the coin,
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mental health issues that come along with
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verdicts.
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most of the
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end up in psychiatric hospitals before rushing to conclude anything
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. In conclusion, in my own perspective capital
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including
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should be abolished and
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in a mental facility while still under trial and in
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prisons ,
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cure the cause than dealing with a problem that we have not established
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Advocates
  • Capital punishment
  • Contemporary society
  • Violent crimes
  • Deterrence
  • Retribution
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Imprisonment
  • Innocent
  • Unethical
  • Inhumane
  • Misuse
  • Legal systems
  • Heinous crimes
  • Closure
  • Moral concerns
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