In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.
It is indisputable that in some countries around the world,
people
tend to expect the improvement of life
. This
essay will show the positive effects and also
some drawbacks of the development, but its positive effects are much more considerable.
The main advantage of this
development is that it helps improve the quality of life
in terms of healthcare and convenience. On the healthcare aspect, if life
expectancy increases, then
it experiences the same thing. As the development in healthcare, people
illness will be reduced; therefore
human lifespan will be increased. The longer lifespan gives us more time to spend with our family and also
to enjoy our life
. On another aspect, as our life
becomes more convenient such
as transportation and services. For example
, we can travel anywhere easily and live in more service and entertainment. Therefore
, there are more supermarkets, banks, theatres, etc. built to keep up with people
's life
demands.
On the contrary
, as life
expectancy is increasing, the budget that government should provide also
rise. This
problem will not affect much to some rich countries. But it can be a considerable disadvantage to most poor countries. For example
, to have more budget, the government make their citizen paid high taxes. And this
leads to their struggles to find jobs in order to earn more money.
In conclusion, people
's expectation of life
improvement has lots of positive effects, although
there is one disadvantage which might be not a problem if the government have proper solutions. This
is also
an important step to evolve our life
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