You are currently trying to improve your knowledge of a language which is not your first language. You have a friend who speaks this language fluently. You have decided to write to this friend Write a letter to your friend.In your letter, Explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly. propose that you meet your friend to talk about it. Write at least 150 words.
Dear Imran,
I hope you are in sound health and doing well. I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am seeking help from you to enhance my language
skills in English
, which is not my first language
.
As you know, I have obtained a BBA with a major in human resources management from an independent university, and I have also
been working for a multinational manufacturing company as a human resources manager since 2022. I realized that I have to upskill my English
language
with a view to smooth communication with my colleagues, as most are foreigners.
As far as I am concerned, you have a good command of the English
language
, and you are a tech student in a private batch. I am looking for some suggestions to develop my English
skills, especially how to learn this
language
swiftly so that I can talk to any foreigner fluently in any situation.
Let's catch up one weekend in our old spot to have a cup of coffee in person as well as
discuss this
matter in detail. Please let me know your convenient time so that I can meet you personally.
See you soon.
Thanks,
FaisalSubmitted by faisalmahamood on
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coherence cohesion
While the letter does address the three bullet points required by the prompt, the progression of ideas could be improved. Ensure that each paragraph transitions smoothly into the next.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate, but you should consider using a more formal sign-off for letters that are not to family or close friends.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes several ideas in one paragraph, making it difficult to follow. Separate ideas into different paragraphs for clarity.
task achievement
Your task achievement is generally good, as you have addressed all parts of the prompt; however, you could provide more specific examples and detail.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is slightly informal which is not entirely suitable for the context. Maintain a consistent level of formality throughout the letter.
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