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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

#nations #countries #relief #disasters
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Natural disasters can trouble everyone. It is argued that developing
countries
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 should be helped by developed
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 during natural calamities. In my opinion,
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 completely agree with
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 statement because rich
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 have a surplus of
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 at their disposal and they can reap the rewards of goodwill in future.
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, developed
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 should help poor
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 in the event of natural disasters as they have plenty of
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 to divert during
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 crises. Most of the developed
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 have a surplus of cash owing to higher per capita income and their own requirement for
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 can easily be met, despite them using part of their wealth for humanitarian work.
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, many natural
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 as grains or milk products are perishable in nature, which can aptly be used in the beginning.
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, a recent study has shown that the altruistic work done by the United
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 during the Tsunami waves in Indonesia helped in the survival of more than 2.3 million people.
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, developed
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 should extend help to under-developed
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 during exigencies as tables can turn at any time. As evident in past, poor
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 can become rich and rich
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 can fall into poverty too.
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, even the rich
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 might have requirements of scarce
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, which only some poor
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 have in abundance.
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, during the Covid-19 pandemic, India became the largest manufacturer and supplier of life-saver vaccines and these vaccines were distributed to the developed
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 too. To conclude, under-developed
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 should get assistance from wealthy
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 since developed
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 have more than what they need and even they might need help in future as their own situation may change with time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Humanitarian relief
  • Infrastructure
  • Global solidarity
  • Disproportionately
  • External assistance
  • Rebuilding efforts
  • Disaster response
  • Investment in stability
  • Dependency theory
  • Responsible intervention
  • Paternalistic
  • Shared humanity
  • Sovereignty
  • Capabilities
  • Fatality rates
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