Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means, others believe that these games are contributing to children’s development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
"
Computer
games
lead several demerits to young people
", said critics. In contrast
, some people
accept that PC games
can improve children in several terms such
as cognitive, social, and interested.
Kids
are always prohibited from playing games
because adults believe that there are a lot of consequences if their offsprings become addicted, especially being aggressive people
. Playing online games
with friends, it is commonly seen that young people
, particularly teens, say rude words while playing due to the fact that they are going to lose points. Due to this
, many parents are worried that will their kids
become offensive people
, and have fragile emotions, in the worst case is depression. ,,
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Moreover
in some cases, youngster pester their parents to purchase them the game items which is quite high. Add a comma
,Moreover
Subsequently
, young people
will not learn how to accumulate money. Indeed, the disadvantages of computer
game addiction do not only bring fewer terolances but also
myopia. Currently, we can apparently see that more than half of students wear glasses. The academician reveals that the major factor is from spending too much time in front of screens. Unfortunately, there are long term effects, which are eyes diseases and vision issues.
On the other hand
, there are several boons in playing games
. Interestingly, some categories of games
, such
as puzzles or quiz, assist in improving kids
the cognitive skills, particularly in mathematics, because they have to solve the problems in order. Additionally
, famous in teens, survival PC games
such
as PubG or Counter Strikes also
create good friendships. These games
require teamwork, so kids
can learn how to brainstorm to achieve their goals and acknowledge other ideas. Interestingly, they can join the E-Sport competition, which offers a massive amount of prizes such
as money or undergraduate scholarships. For ,example my friends who are talented in computer
games
, won the first
prize and conceived the scholarships at the IT program at the college.
To summarise, in my opinion, enjoying PC games
does not bring consequences to children a lot of parents have a limit for them, for ,example restricted times. Furthermore
, guardians should encourage what they like because computer
games
create them education, friendship ,and career.Submitted by buildtobuilt on
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