Some people think that the government should knock down old building and make way for new building Do you agree or disagree

Owing to fascinating development in the field of construction there at times is visible a huge disparity in
buildings
that are old and new
hence
some people come up with an argument that the government should knock down old
buildings
to allow the construction of new ones the idea does seem modern yet upon deeper thought is not feasible and disagree with it To commence with knowing down the building and construction new ones at a given time is not at all possible at any place whatsoever the old coexist with the new a building is usually designed to
last
1000 years and to tear it down when all it
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it is a little maintenance is a waste of precision money that can be used for all other
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of infrastructure development
also
some parts of the city the Heritage location preserving which is mandatory of us if we wish to take pride in our culture and traditions they are
walk in
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museum
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the museum
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of life gone past the
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complexity of which is there for us to appreciate and learn from
Fruthermore
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Furthermore
is not always possible to predict that the current design of
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building will pass the test of time and remain equally acceptable and efficient in future all in all a small proportion of old
buildings
may be risky or may not be fit for today lifestyle in terms of comfortable and can be there for razed to the ground There Is no doubt That a time old structure
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a lot more maintenance
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the comfort they provide for us or with the
grow
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of the city come to be on location which
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circulation
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of traffic difficulties in the case the old certainly should make place for new so that space can be better utilised and we can save the human and material resource that need to the spent on endless maintenance tasks To conclude To simply
no knock
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old
buildings
and build new ones is not a good idea according to me I think it is the mockery of the concept of development
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