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Some people think that the government should knock down old building and make way for new building Do you agree or disagree

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Owing to fascinating development in the field of construction there at times is visible a huge disparity in
buildings
 that are old and new
hence
 some people come up with an argument that the government should knock down old
buildings
 to allow the construction of new ones the idea does seem modern yet upon deeper thought is not feasible and disagree with it To commence with knowing down the building and construction new ones at a given time is not at all possible at any place whatsoever the old coexist with the new a building is usually designed to
last
 1000 years and to tear it down when all it
need
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 it is a little maintenance is a waste of precision money that can be used for all other
kind
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 of infrastructure development
also
 some parts of the city the Heritage location preserving which is mandatory of us if we wish to take pride in our culture and traditions they are
walk in
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museum
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the museum
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 of life gone past the
beauty
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 complexity of which is there for us to appreciate and learn from
Fruthermore
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Furthermore
 is not always possible to predict that the current design of
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building will pass the test of time and remain equally acceptable and efficient in future all in all a small proportion of old
buildings
 may be risky or may not be fit for today lifestyle in terms of comfortable and can be there for razed to the ground There Is no doubt That a time old structure
need
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 a lot more maintenance
that
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than
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 the comfort they provide for us or with the
grow
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 of the city come to be on location which
make
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circulation
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the circulation
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 of traffic difficulties in the case the old certainly should make place for new so that space can be better utilised and we can save the human and material resource that need to the spent on endless maintenance tasks To conclude To simply
no knock
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 old
buildings
 and build new ones is not a good idea according to me I think it is the mockery of the concept of development
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